From f1b54d1d7fedf1b21bc0dd45ddc1fbf94ed12af2 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: apezio <apexio@gmail.com>
Date: Sun, 10 Sep 2017 20:45:52 -0700
Subject: [PATCH] Update index.html
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@@ -20,9 +20,7 @@ Title: Home
<div class="main-info">
<h1 id="main-h1">Monero</h1>
<h2 id="main-h2">Private Digital Currency</h2>
- <p id="main-text">Monero is a secure, private, and untraceable cryptocurrency. It is open-source and accessible to all. With Monero, you are your own bank. Only
- you control and are responsible for your funds. Your accounts
- and transactions are kept private from prying eyes.</p>
+ <p id="main-text">Monero is a secure, private, and untraceable cryptocurrency. It is open-source and accessible to all. With Monero, you are your own bank. Only you control and are responsible for your funds. Your accounts and transactions are kept private from prying eyes.</p>
<p><a href="/get-started/using/" class="btn-link btn-auto btn-primary">Get Started</a></p>
</div>
</div>
@@ -71,7 +69,7 @@ Title: Home
</div>
<div class="col-lg-6 col-md-6 col-sm-8 col-xs-12 why-text">
<h3>Monero is fungible.</h3>
- <p> Monero is fungible because it is private by default. This means no one can tell one Monero from another Monero and therefore it can't be blacklisted by exchanges or vendors.</p>
+ <p> Monero is fungible because it is private by default. This means no one can tell one Monero from another Monero and therefore your funds can't be blacklisted by exchanges or vendors.</p>
</div>
</div>
</div>
@@ -169,7 +167,7 @@ Title: Home
<div class="row center-xs">
<div class="col">
<h2>User Guides</h2>
- <p class="main-resources">Step-by-step guides to all things Monero are separated by category and cover everything from creating a wallet to recovering a wallet, and even how to edit this website.</p>
+ <p class="main-resources">Step-by-step guides to all things Monero are separated by category and cover everything from creating a wallet to supporting the network, and even how to edit this website.</p>
<p><a href="/resources/user-guides/" class="btn-link btn-auto">Read user guides</a></p>
</div>
</div>
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