From ef148f22b812fd8d5f47e98a202205a36c7060e1 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: tyrionmcmaster <31110358+tyrionmcmaster@users.noreply.github.com> Date: Tue, 21 Nov 2017 13:13:57 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 1/4] Slight modifications to wording on home page --- index.html | 12 ++++++------ 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-) diff --git a/index.html b/index.html index 4ee8af9d..25b36404 100644 --- a/index.html +++ b/index.html @@ -37,7 +37,7 @@ Title: Home
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Monero is secure.

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Monero is secure

Monero is a decentralized cryptocurrency, meaning it is secure digital cash operated by a network of users. Transactions are confirmed by distributed consensus, and then immutably recorded on the blockchain. Third-parties do not need to be trusted to keep your Monero safe.

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Monero is private.

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Monero uses ring signatures and ring confidential transactions to obfuscate the amounts, origins, and destinations of all transactions. Monero provides all the benefits of a decentralized cryptocurrency, without any of the typical privacy concessions.

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Monero is private

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Monero uses ring signatures, ring confidential transactions, and stealth addresses to obfuscate the origins, amounts and destinations of all transactions. Monero provides all the benefits of a decentralized cryptocurrency, without any of the typical privacy concessions.

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Monero is untraceable.

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Monero is untraceable

Sending and receiving addresses as well as transacted amounts are obfuscated by default. Transactions on the Monero blockchain cannot be linked to a particular user or real-world identity.

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Monero is fungible.

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Monero is fungible because it is private by default. In its current state, it is extremely unlikely that Monero will ever be blacklisted by exchanges or vendors due to its association in previous transactions.

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Monero is fungible

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Monero is fungible because it is private by default. Units of Monero cannot be blacklisted by vendors or exchanges due to their association in previous transactions.

-- GitLab From c06544e6f19820c32f4a2843e25f5b42fcddf125 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: tyrionmcmaster <31110358+tyrionmcmaster@users.noreply.github.com> Date: Tue, 21 Nov 2017 18:22:44 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 2/4] Update index.html --- index.html | 8 ++++---- 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/index.html b/index.html index 25b36404..fa5022f2 100644 --- a/index.html +++ b/index.html @@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ Title: Home

Monero

Private Digital Currency

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Monero is a secure, private, and untraceable cryptocurrency. It is open-source and accessible to all. With Monero, you are your own bank. Only you control and are responsible for your funds. Your accounts and transactions are kept private from prying eyes.

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Monero is a secure, private and untraceable cryptocurrency. It is open-source and accessible to all. With Monero, you are your own bank. Only you control and are responsible for your funds. Your accounts and transactions are kept private from prying eyes.

Get Started

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Monero is secure

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Monero is a decentralized cryptocurrency, meaning it is secure digital cash operated by a network of users. Transactions are confirmed by distributed consensus, and then immutably recorded on the blockchain. Third-parties do not need to be trusted to keep your Monero safe.

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Monero is a decentralized cryptocurrency, meaning it is secure digital cash operated by a network of users. Transactions are confirmed by distributed consensus and then immutably recorded on the blockchain. Third-parties do not need to be trusted to keep your Monero safe.

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Monero is private

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Monero uses ring signatures, ring confidential transactions, and stealth addresses to obfuscate the origins, amounts and destinations of all transactions. Monero provides all the benefits of a decentralized cryptocurrency, without any of the typical privacy concessions.

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Monero uses ring signatures, ring confidential transactions and stealth addresses to obfuscate the origins, amounts and destinations of all transactions. Monero provides all the benefits of a decentralized cryptocurrency, without any of the typical privacy concessions.

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Monero is fungible

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Monero is fungible because it is private by default. Units of Monero cannot be blacklisted by vendors or exchanges due to their association in previous transactions.

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Monero is fungible because it is private by default. Units of Monero cannot be blacklisted by vendors or exchanges due to their association in previous transactions.

-- GitLab From ea5ae71c875b85fe40d66f12a090b400c0f75816 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: tyrionmcmaster <31110358+tyrionmcmaster@users.noreply.github.com> Date: Wed, 22 Nov 2017 09:46:46 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 3/4] Update index.html --- index.html | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/index.html b/index.html index fa5022f2..647b1968 100644 --- a/index.html +++ b/index.html @@ -69,7 +69,7 @@ Title: Home

Monero is fungible

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Monero is fungible because it is private by default. Units of Monero cannot be blacklisted by vendors or exchanges due to their association in previous transactions.

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Monero is fungible because it is private by default. Units of Monero cannot be blacklisted by vendors or exchanges due to their association in previous transactions.

-- GitLab From 27b0e1d02de350d1c151e9f1e26eda5ed2ccc11d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: tyrionmcmaster <31110358+tyrionmcmaster@users.noreply.github.com> Date: Mon, 4 Dec 2017 22:31:17 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 4/4] Update index.html --- index.html | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/index.html b/index.html index 647b1968..d13e7272 100644 --- a/index.html +++ b/index.html @@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ Title: Home

Monero

Private Digital Currency

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Monero is a secure, private and untraceable cryptocurrency. It is open-source and accessible to all. With Monero, you are your own bank. Only you control and are responsible for your funds. Your accounts and transactions are kept private from prying eyes.

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Monero is a secure, private, and untraceable cryptocurrency. It is open-source and accessible to all. With Monero, you are your own bank. Only you control and are responsible for your funds. Your accounts and transactions are kept private from prying eyes.

Get Started

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Monero is private

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Monero uses ring signatures, ring confidential transactions and stealth addresses to obfuscate the origins, amounts and destinations of all transactions. Monero provides all the benefits of a decentralized cryptocurrency, without any of the typical privacy concessions.

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Monero uses ring signatures, ring confidential transactions, and stealth addresses to obfuscate the origins, amounts, and destinations of all transactions. Monero provides all the benefits of a decentralized cryptocurrency, without any of the typical privacy concessions.

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