Commit 5d836486 authored by luigi's avatar luigi
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Some style changes

I realize (realise?) a lot of this is is personal style, but some of the sentence structure was rather awkward.

I'm not in love with the "untraceable_text" yet; suggestions welcome.
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page_title: "Monero - secure, private, untraceable"
what_is_1: What is
what_is_2: " ?"
what_is_orange_block: "Monero is a secure, private, untraceable currency that is open-source and freely available to all."
what_is_text_block_1: "You are your own bank, you control and are responsible for your funds, and nobody can trace your transfers."
what_is_text_block_2: "Want to find out more? An overview of Monero's main features are below, and if you'd like to try Monero for yourself the"
what_is_orange_block: "Monero is a secure, private, untraceable currency. It is open-source and freely available to all."
what_is_text_block_1: "With Monero, you are your own bank. Only you control and are responsible for your funds, and your accounts and transactions are kept private from prying eyes."
what_is_text_block_2: "Want to find out more? An overview of Monero's main features are below. If you'd like to try Monero for yourself the"
what_is_text_block_3: "Getting Started"
what_is_text_block_4: "section is an excellent launching point."
news: News
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private: Private
secure: Secure
untraceable: Untraceable
private_text: "Monero uses a cryptographically sound system to allow you to send and receive funds without your @transactions being easily revealed on the @blockchain (the distributed ledger of transactions). This ensures that your purchases, receipts, and all transfers remain absolutely private by default."
untraceable_text: "By taking advantage of @ring-signatures, a special property of certain types of cryptography, Monero is able to ensure that transactions are not only untraceable, but have an optional measure of ambiguity that ensures that transactions cannot easily be tied back to an individual user or computer."
secure_text: "Using the power of a distributed peer-to-peer @consensus network every transaction is cryptographically secured. Individual @accounts have a 25 word @mnemonic-seed displayed when created, and can be written down to backup the @account. Account files are encrypted with a passphrase to ensure they are useless if stolen."
private_text: "Monero uses a cryptographically sound system that allows you to send and receive funds without your @transactions being publically visible on the @blockchain (the distributed ledger of transactions). This ensures that your purchases, receipts, and other transfers remain private by default."
untraceable_text: "By taking advantage of @ring-signatures, a special property of certain types of cryptography, Monero enables untraceable transactions. This means it's ambiguous which funds have been spent, and thus extremely unlikely that a transaction could be linked to particular user."
secure_text: "Using the power of a distributed peer-to-peer @consensus network, every transaction is cryptographically secured. Individual @accounts have a 25 word @mnemonic-seed displayed when created, which can be written down to back up the @account. Account files are encrypted with a passphrase to ensure they are worthless if stolen."
how_do_i_1: "How do I "
how_do_i_2: " ?"
get_started: get started
get_started_1: "The fastest way to start using Monero is by using a web @account manager such as "
get_started_1: "The fastest way to start using Monero is with a web @account manager such as "
mymonero: "MyMonero"
get_started_2: "."
get_started_3: "Alternatively, if you would like to run a [full Monero node](/getting-started/running) you can download the client and a kick-starter @blockchain (to bring your local client up to speed) using the download link on the right."
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